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Antecedent Question

Dear Copy Bitch: Does this make sense and do the words in red refer to the client? They’re supposed to: “The first of the 2 or 3 sessions with the trainer is used to develop custom training plans, which are designed to show clients when they’re scheduled to train on their own during each 4-week cycle of their plan.”

—Todd, Boston

A: Yes, it does make sense, and the pronouns are correctly referring to the antecedent (“clients”).